<~*~> This is The Story Of A Girl <~*~>

This Is The Story Of A Girl, Who Lived In A World, Where No One Believed.

Chapter 1:
"MOM!" Kasey yelled "YOU HAVE TO BELIEVE ME, THERE'S SOMEONE OUT THERE THAT CAN HURT US ALL"
"Honey, saying that your best friends an alien and that he can vanish and so can you, and that there's some evil Joker or something out there, i just can't believe you!"
"BUT YOU HAVE TO"
"I can't"
What is going through my daughters mind, Karie thought. Karie knew it was true, the same thing happened when she was a child, it was the house, all the house. It was Enchanted, where you can have friends but never *BANG* she heard a noise from upstairs.
Why does she have to pick on ME why can't she choose someone else. Those where Kasey's thoughts as she smashed her room, she heard someone coming up the steps. "Oh crap" she muttered, 'To Blake, To Blake, To Blake, To Blake' She thought, she dissapeared to Blake's "House"

WOW! Thats really good! Continue!

Chapter 2
Blakes House, well, it looked more like a shack to be honest. But once inside, it was a HUGE as a palace, but there was a problem.
"Kasey, they're after us again. i TOLD you to stay in your house, its the ONLY safe place"
"BLAKE! You can't expect me to leave you AGAIN, you're my friend" she told him
"Yes, but, but, but,"
"You promised not to be afraid to say it, i think it sounds funny"
"OK, you KNOW that Lord Hobbernicle is after us again, you KNOW that he's angry about the time machine problem"
"WHAT? I THOUGHT YOU WERE AN ALIEN"
"Well, Actually, i'm a soldier boy from the 1800's"
"GREAT you AND my mom!"
"KASEY! DON'T LEAVE!"
As he said that, Kasey dissapeared, but not by teleporting , it was some strange force
"KASEY" he shouted one last time
He didn't know if he would ever see her again.

great job, i enjoyed it

You are a really good writer!

Thakns! not when it comes to scchool though!

i like ur story!

good Job!

come on WL and write more! this is GREAT!

Soon.....

She woke up, there was this old guy staring at her.
"OUCH!" she yelled as her head started throbbing "EWWW get away from me!"
"GIVE ME THE TIME MACHINE"
"The watty whattsie?"
"THE TIME MACHINE , i made it, and when I visited the 1800's civil war, there was a boy who was begging me to let him come with, so i let him, WHERE IS IT???"
"He JUST told me , like before *EWW* cold hands, like before you came, that he was like, a soldier person, i thought he was an alien"
The old man sniffed
"Its in the house! I can smell its sent, i know that house! It was my house long ago"
"What time frame are you from?"
"the 1500's , your neighboorhood was an experiment, to see if we could thrive there, i lived in that house, i set the curse on it, its in the house"
"Can you get it and go?"
"No, i need the boy"
"Why?"
"haven't you seen those Honda commercials? Time continuance thing"
"oh..."
"Where is he?"
"Well, he's in this shack thingiee he lives in, i don't really know where it IS i just know that if i think 'SHACK' really hard then say 'go' then i go there"
"Ahhh... time continuance powers, you'll have those forever"
"Yeah... can we just get the machine"
"No... you know my secrets, i can see it in your face, you must be gotton rid of"
At that, she froze in fear.

OMG! that makes me want to read more and more! great job!